Week 5A: Sept. 22

Today in class, we had a final critique of our icons, and presented our final reports. I had some suggestions on how to fix my icons, as well.

For this icon, I was told to adjust the perspective and make the pencil look more like it is actually tucked behind the worm's supposed "ear."

For this icon, it was suggested to adjust the part of the worm that is pointed, which I thought would convey the fact that he was sticking out of the window.

For all of my icons I was instructed to work on the lines and make sure that they are all consistent. I was also told to keep the expressions of my worm relatively the same.








Homework:
- Make adjustments as needed to icons/presentation.